Ink Drawing on Vellum, 12″x9″

I did this ink drawing a couple of years back to work on my hatching.  I wasn’t very consistent, but the sloppiness adds some character to the overall feel of the piece.  I recently tried re-drawing it with a more uniform hatching look which turned out looking cleaner but a bit stiff.  I’m not sure which one I prefer…

Ink Drawing on Vellum, 12″x9″